Barbara Aisa en de haren hebben niet netjes geparafrasserd in de tweede zin van haar artikel:
"Although to date the underlying neurobiology of depression remain elusive, there is an increasing evidence implicating stress in brain disturbances thought to underlie certain forms of depression or particular componens of the depressive syndrome (Kessler, 1997, Kendler et al., 1998; Van Praag, 2004)" (Aisa, 2007)
"The central issue raised in this paper is: can stress cause depression? Phrased more precisely: can stress cause brain disturbances thought to underlie (certain forms of) depression or particular components of the depressive syndrome." (Van Praag, 2004)
Het is een mooi voorbeeld dat slecht parafraseren leidt tot kromme zinnen...
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